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"It was half past midnight on a Friday night--the witching hour, my dead grandma used to call it. I was tending bar in a gangster's suite in a glitzy Atlantic City hotel. I'd stuffed myself into a black silk sheath as snug as it was expensive and was pouring drinks, grinning like a fool. But I was scared."http://bibliophilebythesea.blogspot.com

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Wondering why she is "scared"? I'd keep reading.
Beth F said…
I like the Jersey Shore setting! I'd have to read at least a bit more.
Anonymous said…
Not my cup of tea but hope you enjoy it.
JoAnn said…
I'd keep going... want to find out why she's scared!
Kim@Time2Read said…
This one hasn't hooked me yet, but it is interesting enough for me to not give up on yet.
Today I'm featuring 'Elizabeth is Missing' by Emma Healey.
http://mytime2read.blogspot.com/2014/06/tuesday-memes-elizabeth-is-missing.html
Sounds intense! Thanks for sharing...and here's mine: “SHE CAN HIDE”

Anonymous said…
Atlantic city, gangsters, late night...sounds intriguing! Thanks for sharing it.
Literary Feline said…
What a fun opening! I would keep reading.
Nise' said…
I'd keep reading to find out why she was scared.
Margot said…
I'd keep reading. There's enough mystery there to keep me going. I also like the title.
Yvonne said…
I always enjoy books set in Atlantic City. Sounds like a good one.
Unknown said…
Sounds intriguing, the first few sentences give quite a bit of information already.
Peggy @ The Pegster Reads
kayerj said…
that's a great beginning. I'd read on just to find out what's going on. thanks so much for stopping by. I really appreciate it. Have a nice day.
Tea said…
Thanks to all for stopping by.

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